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A Circle Around Me 

"Poetry is thinking of one thing in terms of another."  ~Robert Frost

Presented by Del Hughes (with gratitude to Fran Claggett and her book that changed my life, Drawing Your Own Conclusions.)
Introduction
Standards 
Objectives
Activities
Assessment 
Results
Resources

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Introduction
Ours is a world of metaphor and symbol, of signifier and the signified.  People define and take control of their spaces by visual representation of their personality traits.  In this project, scholars will think, write and talk about themselves in terms of other things:  plants, animals, colors, elements of nature, and so on.  Thesauruses, dictionaries, garden manuals, and online sources come together to support the scholars' search for just the right way to create a visual representation of what makes them them. 
Subject:  Language Arts
Topic:  Vocabulary/Visual Arts
Grade Level:  9
Student Lesson name and URL:  A Circle Around Me


Standards
The California Language Arts Content Standards addressed in this lesson are:

Ninth Grade
Reading

1.0. WORD ANALYSIS, FLUENCY, AND SYSTEMATIC VOCABULARY DEVELOPMENT
Vocabulary and Concept Development: 

1.1. identify and use the literal and figurative meanings of words, and understand word derivation
1.2. distinguish between the denotative and connotative meanings of words, and interpret the connotative power of words

STANDARD for Visual Literacy

Students will create and explain conceptual graphic representations of characters, symbols, and ideas in literary works as they visualize and articulate their own symbolic understandings of texts.

Elaboration

A graphic, is a visual construct using lines, words, and color in a symbolic way to create a coherent conceptual design. It presents a unifying symbol or related set of symbols arising from piece of literature.  The graphic symbol may be drawn from the text itself (the pig's head in Lord of the Flies, the urn in "Ode on a Grecian Urn) or it may evolve from metaphor-making (a bat to represent Teiresias, signifying the outward blindness but inward seeing).  In some graphics, the design may point to symbols rather than depict them overtly, as in lines suggesting spider webs or geometric demarcations suggesting beehive cells.

The graphic uses color or lack of color with intent.  Color may be used symbolically or it may be used to organize aspects of the graphic.  Black and white graphics may be used in the Japanese sense of Notan (echoed in Escher) to convey positive and negative space or emotion.

Literary graphics as study aids frequently incorporate quotations from the text.  For those graphics intended to be used as maps for writing papers, it is important for the graphic artist to include the textual reference for the quotation.  Quotations are often used artistically to support the visual construct.

Through the production of graphics, students experience four critical learning functionsóobserving, analyzing, imaging, and feelingóas they interact with the texts they are reading and the essays, articles, stories, and poems they are writing.

They learn to develop their ways of learning in three significant ways:

They learn
 1) to activate the powers of imagery, detail, symbol, and design as they
 read
 and write
 2) to incorporate close observation, personal association, analysis and
 metaphor in reading and writing
 3) to stimulate the long-term memory through the integration of both visual
 and verbal approaches

 Graphic strategies address the needs of the full range of students,
 including:

 1)  Students who are new to this country and just learning its language as
 well as its customs
 2)  Students who are labeled "learning disabled" in our primarily
 verbal/analytical schools;  such students may be among those whose dominant
 learning mode is visual-spatial
 3)  Students labeled culturally "deprived" when they are unfamiliar with the
 dominant culture of the schoolroom, but rich in their own ethnic cultures
 4)  The academically gifted, who either drop out from boredom or learn to
 play the competitive, limiting "game" of school

 This page appears in A Measure of Success: from Assignment to Assessment in
 English Language Arts, Claggett, Heinemann-Boynton/Cook, 1996.
 


Instructional Objectives

  • Insert your learning objectives here. For example:
 


Student Activities
 

Introductory Activities
 

  • Scholars start to explore the idea of symbols and metaphor through a deceptively simple journaling activity
  • Exploration continues as scholars write down their responses to these questions from the teacher.

 
 

 Enabling Activities

  • Initial responses (nouns) from Introductory Activity are focused and tightened and entered into the worksheet table (Sun Images).
  • Adjectives are selected to define chosen aspects of initial responses (nouns); selections are focused and tightened by thesaurus exploration and dictionary refining of adjectives, and entered into the worksheet table (column two).
  • Further thesaurus/dictionary use and vocabulary development happen as scholars select antonyms for the adjectives entered into column two of the worksheet table and enter those antonymns into column three.
  • The final column of the worksheet table is completed as scholars choose responses (Shadow Images) that are defined by the antonym adjectives in column three.

 

 Culminating Activities

  • Within the framework of a circle, using color and shape, but no words, scholars draw or symbolize all of their sun images and all of their shadow images.
  • Scholars write the framing sentences and complete their projects by transferring the sentences to the border of the circle.


Assessment
 

  • Insert your grading rubric for the culminating activity or a link to your rubric or test document file.


Results

  • After implementing your lesson (sometime between January & March), insert a chart of your pre-test, post-test, and culminating assessment data.


Web Resources & Supplementary Materials

Introductory Activity
List and link the web resources for this activity here. Also link supplementary materials such as PDF files and /or document files.

Enabling Activity
www.dictionary.com

Culminating Activity
Claggett, Fran, et al. Drawing Your Own Conclusions : Graphic Strategies for Reading, Writing, and Thinking  (November 1992) Heinemann (Txt); ISBN: 0867092939 

To view the work of scholars coached by an esteemed colleague, click here 
 


 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Last Revised: 08/19/2000

Drawing Your Own Conclusions : Graphic Strategies for Reading, Writing, and Thinking  by Mary Frances Claggett, Joan Brown (Contributor)